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2011 Seaman Garson Essay Scholarship Contest

Scoring Rubric

Entry Requirements:

  • Reflect upon personal impact/response
  • Put forth a plan of action to affect change in one's self, school and/or community

An Above Average Essay:

  • Understands and reflects upon the theme of personal responsibility
  • Identifies action steps that can be implemented
  • Incorporates drama, empathy, sincerity and emotion
  • Exhibits dramatic potential as an oral presentation
AVERAGEABOVE AVERAGE
CONTENT:
Originality and creativity in describing impact of discrimination
Essay shows evidence of originality, imagination and creativityEssay shows significant evidence of originality, imagination and creativity
CLARITY:

Essay defines the theme of personal responsibility, even if development somewhat vague

Includes details

Writing may wander from central theme

Clear understanding and embellishment on theme of personal responsibility

Specific details clearly enrich the central theme

Writing is clear and focused; holds reader's attention

CAPACITY:
Defined action steps and potential to realize action plan

Plan is personal, doesn't involve the action of others

Shows promise, but not immediately ready for implementation

Action steps lack specific clarity/focus

Plan involves personal action and encourages the actions of others

Action steps clearly defined and capable of near-immediate implementation.

CONVICTION:
Sincerity, believability, emotional impact, drama

Essay exhibits sincerity and conviction and engages the reader/listener

Story is believable

Language exhibits some elements of storytelling and potential to engage the audience as an oral presentation

Essay exhibits emotional impact of story on the writer and arouses emotion and empathy in the reader/listener

Story is told dramatically

Language exhibits distinctive musicality/fluidity and excellent potential to engage audience as an oral presentation


CRAFTSMANSHIP:
Mastery of style

Reasonable control over limited range of standard writing conventions

The message is understandable and the content flows with little confusion

Writing has clear focus and direction

Sentences and composition well constructed; good grasp of standard writing conventions

Writing makes a compelling case
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